I worked for 14 years to save up and buy my dream house. It wasn’t easy. There were nights I went to bed hungry because every penny counted. The day I finally got the keys to my own place was supposed to be the happiest of my life. But when I opened the door to celebrate with my girlfriend… I froze.
My name is Kevin, I’m 32, and until two months ago, I’d never owned anything bigger than a beat-up Honda Civic. But that all changed when I finally got the keys to my first house… a moment I’d been dreaming about since I was 18 and broke.
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The journey wasn’t pretty. After my adoptive parents made it clear I was on my own at graduation, I learned real quick what survival meant. College was ramen noodles, 20-hour work weeks at a gas station, and falling asleep over textbooks that cost more than my monthly grocery budget.
“You’re crazy if you think you’ll ever afford a house,” my old roommate used to say, watching me transfer another 50 bucks into savings instead of going out. “Live a little, man.”
But I couldn’t live a little. Not when I had this burning need for something that was mine… really mine.
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Everything changed when I landed a position at a reputed tech company four years ago. Finally, a real paycheck. And three months ago, something even better walked into my life — Betty.
We met at a coffee shop in downtown Oakville. She was arguing with the barista about whether they could make her drink “less caffeinated but more energetic,” and I couldn’t help but laugh.
“Are you laughing at my very reasonable request?” she’d asked me, hands on her hips.
“I’m laughing because I’ve never heard anyone ask for a paradox in a cup before!”
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She rolled her eyes, but she smiled. “I suppose you think you’re clever.”
“Clever enough to buy you a regular coffee and see if that works better.”
***
Three months later, I was head over heels. Betty made everything brighter, funnier, and more alive. She’d dance around my tiny apartment while cooking dinner, singing off-key. She made me believe I deserved good things.
On April 13th, everything changed. It was the best day of my life. I’d gotten the keys to 428 Everwood Lane — a $1M three-bedroom house with a front porch, a lush green garden, and a spacious backyard. It was finally mine.
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I called Betty that morning, practically bouncing off the walls.
“I got it! The house is officially mine!”
“Oh my God, Kevin! I’m so proud of you!” Her voice was bright and excited. “We have to celebrate!”
“Come over after work. I’ll pick up a cake and some flowers.”
I spent the whole day unable to concentrate, sketching out plans for furniture and imagining lazy Sunday mornings in my kitchen.
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I stopped at Rosewood Bakery, splurging on a chocolate cake with “Congratulations” in blue frosting. The flowers came from the grocery store. Nothing fancy, just a mixed bouquet that smelled like spring.
I raced home, but the moment the front door swung open… I froze.
Betty was sitting on my couch, but she wasn’t alone. Her suitcases were lined up by the wall like soldiers. A man in a dark suit sat beside her with a briefcase. Betty’s mom, Eugene, and her sister, Lara, stood behind the couch like they were at a funeral.
The cake nearly slipped from my hands.
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“What’s going on here?”
Betty stood up, holding a stack of papers. Her smile was bright and practiced. “Surprise, honey! I wanted to help you with something really important.”
“Help me with what?”
Eugene stepped forward, her voice sharp. “Kevin, dear, if you really love our Betty, you’ll want to make her feel secure in this relationship.”
The man in the suit cleared his throat. “I’m Adams, their family lawyer… and these are deed transfer documents. Simple paperwork to add Betty’s name to the house.”
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My stomach dropped. “Add her name?”
“It’s just a formality!” Betty said, still holding that artificial smile. “If we’re going to build a life together, shouldn’t we both be on the deed? It shows commitment.”
Lara crossed her arms. “Unless you don’t trust her. Is that it, Kevin? After three months, you still don’t trust the woman you claim to love?”
“Three months?” I repeated, my brain struggling to process everything.
“Exactly!” Eugene laughed. “Long enough to know if this is serious. So what’s it going to be?”
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The room felt like it was spinning. This house… this dream I’d worked toward for 14 years… and they wanted me to just sign it away?
“I don’t understand. Betty, we never talked about this.”
“We’re talking about it now. Do you love me, Kevin?”
The question hung in the air. Three pairs of eyes stared at me, waiting. The lawyer tapped his pen against his briefcase.
“Of course I love you, but—”
“No buts,” Lara interrupted. “Either you do or you don’t.”
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“If you loved her, this wouldn’t even be a question,” Eugene added.
Betty’s eyes filled with tears. “I thought you were different, Kevin. I thought you believed in us.”
My chest felt crushed. This house represented everything I’d sacrificed for. But looking at Betty’s face and seeing her hurt… my heart just cracked.
“Give me the papers,” I said.
I set the cake and flowers down and took the pen. My hand shook so badly I could barely hold it. This was insane. But I loved her. I’d do anything for her. Anything.
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I pressed the pen to the first page and started to sign my name. The moment the ink hit the paper, the room exploded.
Betty burst into laughter… not her gentle laugh, but something wild and uncontrolled. Her mom and sister started cackling. Even the lawyer was chuckling.
“Oh my God, his face!” Lara gasped.
“Did you see how scared he looked?” Eugene wiped tears from her eyes.
Then Betty’s friends poured out of the kitchen — five women and three guys I’d never even met, all with their phones out, recording like it was some reality TV ambush.
“We got it all!” one shouted. “That was perfect!”
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I stood there, pen in hand, feeling like I’d been hit by a truck. “What’s happening? Why’s everyone here?”
Betty threw her arms around me, still giggling. “It’s a prank, silly! A surprise party prank! Those aren’t real legal documents… they’re just fake papers!”
I looked down. She was right. The pages weren’t real — just some random text printed across the top. Lorem ipsum dolor sit amet… and my half-finished signature right below it.
“A prank?!” I repeated numbly.
“We wanted to see how you’d react if I dropped a bombshell like that,” Betty explained, beaming. “And you were willing to do it! You were actually going to add me to the deed!”
“Surprise!” they all shouted.
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Everyone was laughing, toasting, and taking pictures. Betty kept hugging me, telling everyone how sweet I was. But I felt hollow inside like someone had scooped out my insides.
“You should have seen your face,” Eugene said, patting my shoulder. “We almost felt bad. Almost!”
“Come on, Kevin, lighten up,” Lara added. “It was just a joke. And it proves how much you love her, right?”
I forced a smile. “Yeah. It’s funny.”
But it wasn’t funny. Not when I’d spent 14 years clawing my way toward this moment. Not when I’d been willing to give up everything for someone who thought my desperation was entertainment.
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The party went on for hours. People ate my congratulations cake and drank champagne in my living room. Betty was radiant, telling the story over and over.
“He was actually going to do it!” she chirped, squeezing my hand. “After three months! Isn’t that sweet?”
***
A month later, Betty and I were walking along Sunset Beach, watching the waves crash against the shore. The prank had become a cute anecdote we told at parties. Everyone always laughed. I’d learned to laugh too.
“Isn’t this perfect?” Betty said, squeezing my hand. “Just you and me and the ocean.”
“It’s perfect!”
“I love you so much, Kevin. Even after my ridiculous prank, you stayed with me. You’re incredible.”
“I love you too.”
And I meant every word. Despite everything, I loved her. Maybe that made me a fool, but it was the truth.
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I stopped walking and turned to face her. The sun was setting behind her, turning her hair golden. My hand found the small velvet box in my pocket.
“Betty,” I said, dropping to one knee in the sand.
Her hands flew to her mouth. “Kevin, what are you..? Oh my God!”
“Will you marry me?” I popped the question, opening the box.
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Betty stared at me, her eyes wide. Then she started laughing… not the wild laughter from the prank, but something softer.
“This better not be a joke!” she said, tears streaming down her cheeks. “If this is payback for the house thing, it’s not funny, Kevin.”
“It’s not a joke. I’m really asking you to marry me. I want to spend my life with you, Betty.”
“Even after I put you through that awful prank?”
“Even then.”
She dropped to her knees beside me, laughing and crying. “Yes! Yes, of course, yes!”
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I slipped the ring onto her finger, and she threw her arms around me, nearly knocking us both over. We stayed there in the sand, holding each other as the sun disappeared, both laughing and crying… and planning our future.
Looking back, that prank taught me something important about love and trust. Real love isn’t about tests or tricks. It’s about choosing each other every day, even when things get complicated.
Betty’s prank nearly gave me a heart attack, sure. But it also showed me I was ready to give up everything for the person I loved. And maybe that was exactly what I needed to know about myself.
We’re getting married next spring in the backyard of our house on Everwood Lane. The one that’s still only in my name, by the way! We decided some things are worth waiting for, and some jokes are only funny once.
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